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January 29, 2010

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Julie O'Brien

Hello! Just wanted to offer some encouragement. The story is shaping up nicely. I wish there were more posts each week!

Annitspurple

OMG CANNIBALS!!!! (I'm predicting)

I can't wait for the next installment!

L. D. Silver

Hi Julie - Thank you very much! And my goal this year is to get to two posts a week, but I'm not there yet. :)

Cla Brown

Enjoyable story. Thanks.

At the end of Chapter 57 the "Next Page" link disappears from the bottom of the post.

Minor quibble from a technical point of view ... but how are the few generators they find running? Is this some time in the future with an unknown power source? All the generators I've used, propane/LNG, gas, diesel are fairly loud, require periodic refueling every 2 to 10 hours unless hardwired into a very large fuel tank which would make them non moveable and still have limited run time and couldn't be used indoors ... they wouldn't enter a lab, then notice the generator running after a while, they'd have heard it from down the hall with the doors closed, and they'd have needed respirators to spend much time in the room because of built up exhaust. You might want to tweak the story here a bit, or add some explaination ... but again thanks for an enjoyable read, please keep it up.

L. D. Silver

Hi Cla Brown - Thank you! I keep forgetting to add the "Next Page" links. Thank you, I will work on adding those in.

Also, thank you for letting me know about the generators. I will work on some tweaks to try and get around those issues. Thanks again! :)

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